Daniel Aguilar 12/1/25 ENG 11000

For Translation 2 For the list of brainstorms for Translation 2, most aspects of developing skill during my essays, especially for the Synthesis Essay because it’s very challenging for me to understand the directions and careful understanding of the meaning of the text. This is really important information because I wanted to be more professional in my writing. I could be someone that would be helpful to make the audiences understand what’s happening in the paragraphs describing more about different types of arguments and opinions. Translation 2 helps me fix those issues that I improved on later on in English class. It’s going to be challenging but it’s part of being a good writer to learn new ways to improve myself with writing essays. I want more support for my writing and ideas from my classmates and professors to help me understand the main issues of my essay skills. With that feedback this could help me improve later on. Without any feedback I will be lacking strategies to improve myself and make more mistakes that will impact my skills of writing an essay. This is why people should have feedback to discuss if there is anything concerning the essays. Before letting my peers read my essay I would need to read back to my essay and make sure if I did the steps correctly and make sure if I’m organized with my essay. It’s hard for me to get used to reading back to my essay and it’s understandable why I felt that way. It is very difficult to stay on track with thinking of having good ideas and finding evidence online or on paper to make sure to have proper information to help improve my essay. Throughout phase 2 I am getting used to learning new strategies to learn from my mistakes that I have made in the past and I did learn a lot about the improvements of my essay skills. At first I forgot how to write down an essay and getting connected to understanding the topic and the body paragraphs. Why writing has changed a lot since Translation 1 and I get the concepts of writing more essays in the future. It’s worth remembering the time that I was having trouble explaining my thoughts about how to write down an essay. I need to look back to the reading and find good evidence to explain the details that support my statement. On line we need to find good sources to guide me to understand the point where sources are the importance of having a good essay. It’s mandatory to write down the author’s name and the sources link within the essays because it will be considered plagiarism. Plagiarism is the main issue of writing because students manage to steal authors’words within the paragraphs and not give any credit for the sentences. If the professor knows that people are stealing the original author’s work it’s understandable why the students lose points. I wanted to express my writing more specifically to the audiences who want to feel conformable communication with me if I did make a mistake because I want more feedback on my own essay and getting along with specific information to support my claim. When I’m finished with my essays, I want to go back and read all over again because I want to be sure if I did all of the requirements correctly. Also making the essay be organized for my professor to fully understand what’s happening in the story. It’s easier for my professor to read my essay if it’s organized. If it’s unorganized it will take longer for my professor to understand my essay because sometimes when an essay is unorganized it will not make sense to my professor and it will also be very confusing. This is why I wanted to improve my Translation 2 so I don’t have to repeat the same mistakes that I did with translation 1 and make sure I fixed all of my mistakes that I have done with my past essays.